You didn't explain why the officer left without following through. As with so many of your stories, I'm left wondering "what happened after that?" Perhaps you feel it's like explaining a joke, and if you have to explain it, it isn't funny anymore. But I think we need just a little more.
I was confused with this one.
Oh no, not good. Where'd I go wrong?
I don't get it?
You didn't explain why the officer left without following through. As with so many of your stories, I'm left wondering "what happened after that?" Perhaps you feel it's like explaining a joke, and if you have to explain it, it isn't funny anymore. But I think we need just a little more.